tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post844460430951003842..comments2023-11-02T11:56:39.454+01:00Comments on HAPPENINGS: Randy Landlord (the conclusion)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-8961026191913662712009-02-17T03:44:00.000+01:002009-02-17T03:44:00.000+01:00I think the end made the story very weak. i would ...I think the end made the story very weak. i would have suggested that she slept with the landlord in her desperation and the resulting guilt will awash her with shame and the arrival of her husband's text will be the anti climatic factor. Here there'll be a sort of balancing and more realistic factor as she cannot all of a sudden be happy with her husband's text after his abandonement of 2months. i will suggest in my case that the receipt of the said text at that crucial time is/was poignant and will be a propelling factor to go ahead and sleep with the randy landlord, if not out of desperation but out of sheer spite in order to get even. But if you insist on taking the moral route, she should have resisted at the point of 'entry' - meaning she should have shook her head because of her principled mind and not as a result of a text received by a husband who has been found wanton. Sorry 'bout the long message and i hope you all get my drift...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-86438471118835353772009-02-16T22:35:00.001+01:002009-02-16T22:35:00.001+01:00i guess the ending could be argued either way..and...i guess the ending could be argued either way..and in this case,it was obvious a higher power stepped in when she had no more strength of her own. and thats the hope we have in God; that He will come through for us when we are at our wits end.<BR/>great job,WF!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-42907000371871757832009-02-16T22:35:00.000+01:002009-02-16T22:35:00.000+01:00i guess the ending could be argued either way..and...i guess the ending could be argued either way..and in this case,it was obvious a higher power stepped in when she had no more strength of her own. and thats the hope we have in God; that He will come through for us when we are at our wits end.<BR/>great job,WF!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-66640320599593508842009-02-14T02:40:00.000+01:002009-02-14T02:40:00.000+01:00The ending seemed slightly rushed but all in all, ...The ending seemed slightly rushed but all in all, a good one. Thank God say she no fall into temptation.Original Mgbekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11409561613382179987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-30631847535870861082009-02-11T17:09:00.000+01:002009-02-11T17:09:00.000+01:00saved by the phone. I like d endingsaved by the phone. I like d endingdoll (retired blogger)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04617294319074603189noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-5002540260292416812009-02-09T14:07:00.000+01:002009-02-09T14:07:00.000+01:00@ DeeMarriage sure takes a lot of work!@Shonathank...@ Dee<BR/>Marriage sure takes a lot of work!<BR/><BR/>@Shona<BR/>thanks hon...i'm glad you love the end<BR/><BR/>@buttercup<BR/>yes o, may God continue to deliver us from temptation<BR/><BR/>@'sola<BR/>thanks for stopping by, glad you liked the story...sometimes, things like this happen in the nick of time!<BR/><BR/>@FFF<BR/>girl you're crazy...lol..can see you love drama...lol<BR/><BR/>@aloted<BR/>abi o...FFF's conclusion is just funny<BR/><BR/>@bumight<BR/>glad you liked it...i don't know if it's realistic but i don't think it isn't..lol...reason, remember they're an old couple and the woman prolly just trusts her husband enough(or maybe she wanted to set a trap for him...borrowing a leaf from FFF's conclusion)..lol<BR/><BR/>@GNG<BR/>lol...money wey she don spend...ok, maybe her husband will refund the landlord..lol..what if in the process of returning the money, the guy grabbed her and overpowered her? hehehe<BR/><BR/>@Beulah<BR/>Glad you liked the story girl..lol at heart beating fast!<BR/><BR/>I should write more i think!Writefreakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03457464940195376970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-61725957837641328722009-02-06T14:04:00.000+01:002009-02-06T14:04:00.000+01:00My heart was beating as i read till i got to the e...My heart was beating as i read till i got to the end. Thank God she didnt give in....Nice ending!Beulah!https://www.blogger.com/profile/13253476795544978424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-6996763305125294562009-02-06T00:30:00.000+01:002009-02-06T00:30:00.000+01:00I liked the story's ending too, but I would have b...I liked the story's ending too, but I would have been happier if she had handed the landlord the envelope of money on her way out. That way there would be nothing left between them. And maybe when her hubby comes home they can discuss moving somewhere else.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-66354900502543402692009-02-04T23:15:00.000+01:002009-02-04T23:15:00.000+01:00i knew there was a reason why i didnt read this po...i knew there was a reason why i didnt read this post on time.<BR/><BR/>loved the story, and the conclusion as well. i just dont like the part where the wife insisted on the landlord taking the woman out. i dont think that is realistic, especially in lagos! lolbumighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16921134538404613210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-36515657497798574452009-02-04T13:17:00.000+01:002009-02-04T13:17:00.000+01:00@FFF i like this your conclusion o...lol@FFF i like this your conclusion o...lolalotedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17293074684237435820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-53254887682395377242009-02-04T09:20:00.000+01:002009-02-04T09:20:00.000+01:00my own conclusion: the landlord's wife & d...my own conclusion: the landlord's wife & d woman's husband rushes into the hotel room, with d landlady screaming 'i don catch u. ehh! so, i set trap 4 u, u come fell into am. na me & u today. u go explain 2 ur husband today wetin u & my husband dey do 4 hotel room'. heheheheheheFlourishing Floridahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13587385454888882192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-55073379591603519952009-02-04T01:33:00.000+01:002009-02-04T01:33:00.000+01:00First time here so i had to read the previous post...First time here so i had to read the previous post. Lovely story. entertaining, yet very realistic of our society. The husband had a perfect sense of timing, not applicable in real life though where the message would have arrived just after the deed. NOOO!'solahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17087828972919414158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-46862642593452489052009-02-03T22:47:00.000+01:002009-02-03T22:47:00.000+01:00wow..temptation has to be the most difficult thing...wow..temptation has to be the most difficult thing ever to go through..if the text didnt come in, she just might have succumbed..hmm!!Buttercuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00182390815082496865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-68224239909436073602009-02-03T17:48:00.000+01:002009-02-03T17:48:00.000+01:00love the end!!love the end!!ShonaVixenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03745455482846320144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-14063612564221774432009-02-03T15:09:00.000+01:002009-02-03T15:09:00.000+01:00A very true fiction! Such things really happen in ...A very true fiction! <BR/><BR/>Such things really happen in our society these days. Although I love the ending, I am of the view that the young couple have to work very hard to make their marriage a success.Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18291645363258422667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-91887179623995886542009-02-03T14:18:00.000+01:002009-02-03T14:18:00.000+01:00@ Dannyvery classic hey? i just couldn't watch her...@ Danny<BR/>very classic hey? i just couldn't watch her cheat on her husband!<BR/><BR/>@YNB<BR/>Aww that's nice, hope you thought it was a nice movie though and not like some home videos we frown at<BR/><BR/>@Inmyhead<BR/>I wouldn't think it's not realistic cos i've seen people who have been in situations like that...and gotten out even at the last minute...thanks a lot<BR/><BR/>@Nefertiti<BR/>thanks babes. i agree the marriage needs work but so long as both parties are willing, i don't think any marriage should be given up on..<BR/>btw i wanted to send you an email, will still do<BR/><BR/>@Jinta<BR/>hehehe...just imagine it..<BR/><BR/>@ibiluv<BR/>whether married or not, temptations abound, it is for one to be able to overcome...no, sex outside marriage is a NO NO<BR/><BR/>@afrobabe<BR/>na you think so o, things like that actually happen<BR/><BR/>@lolia<BR/>thanks...lol..i guess i used that word cos i didn't know what other word to use jare my dear<BR/><BR/>simeone<BR/>well...you say things in different ways<BR/><BR/>@standtall<BR/>you wanted more? my siter na short story jare...a good story should leave you wanting more and wanting to fill in the gaps...i think<BR/><BR/>@Oluwadee<BR/>Hmm well, if you consider that the landlord and his wife are old enough to give birth to this lady and that the woman trusts her husband to be a good man, then i wouldn't think it's unrealistic...Writefreakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03457464940195376970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-46729517945785885542009-02-03T13:21:00.000+01:002009-02-03T13:21:00.000+01:00Like the ending.Not sure its realistic to say, the...Like the ending.<BR/><BR/>Not sure its realistic to say, the landlord's wife asked him to take her to the club.<BR/>I personally wont do such a thing. Especially for a lonely woman.O'Deehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07678018050951152616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-52692273547237765232009-02-03T13:19:00.000+01:002009-02-03T13:19:00.000+01:00No. The ending was not bad. I just wanted more. We...No. The ending was not bad. I just wanted more. Well, guess I will tke ur advice and do what I normally do, I will figure out the rest (lol)The Activisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10208721217617791119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-28436477682729395942009-02-03T12:34:00.000+01:002009-02-03T12:34:00.000+01:00the ending is nice ...but maybe i woulda said ..."...the ending is nice ...<BR/>but maybe i woulda said ..." honey i'm sori..., i'm home now..where are you..?"...olusimeonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17090430527099563273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-37748782781362501012009-02-03T00:08:00.000+01:002009-02-03T00:08:00.000+01:00I love the ending as well :)Meanwhile lol at 'co-h...I love the ending as well :)<BR/><BR/>Meanwhile lol at 'co-host'...It sounds like you guys have a tv show ^_^ Will be sure to check it out though....XxsLoliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06622661980066724665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-80081898493751866552009-02-02T23:46:00.000+01:002009-02-02T23:46:00.000+01:00lol...that ending is morally good but not very rea...lol...that ending is morally good but not very realistic in this society oh...Afrobabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01418456633732918114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-5184741473971438232009-02-02T23:09:00.000+01:002009-02-02T23:09:00.000+01:00i hate that she went along with him to the hotelev...i hate that she went along with him to the hotel<BR/><BR/>even though *i* could have gone along<BR/>and maybe i'll let him see and touch booby........*wink*<BR/><BR/>but being married.....sex outside marriage is a big no-noibiluvhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06357025487806887917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-25444886958836777352009-02-02T23:03:00.000+01:002009-02-02T23:03:00.000+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.ibiluvhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06357025487806887917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-51482615046020044722009-02-02T21:28:00.000+01:002009-02-02T21:28:00.000+01:00good conclusion, however, what if the text had not...good conclusion, however, what if the text had not come in at that time...?Jintahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00101860931419415537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25488842.post-33401313186977080102009-02-02T20:29:00.000+01:002009-02-02T20:29:00.000+01:00Wow! I'm glad she was able to resist the temptatio...Wow! I'm glad she was able to resist the temptation. There is some work to be done in this marriage, that's for sure. Cos the devil don't stop.<BR/><BR/>Nice work, babes!Nefertitihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01272653815975890429noreply@blogger.com